For the last few months I've had the privilege of being the acting unit chaplain for 14 Air Maintenance Squadron here at 14 Wing. This group of talented technicians and mechanics keep Canada's east coast fleet of Aurora surveillance and ASW aircraft flying.
The Air Force does things a little differently than the army. Because 14 AMS' squadron crest features a honey bee, a symbol of industriousness, a member of the squadron dressed in a bee costume and accompanied the outgoing CO off the parade. Also, because the outgoing CO is notoriously fond of Swiss Chalet chicken, another member dressed as a chicken (one wouuld NEVER see this at an RCR parade)appeared at the end to present him with some Swiss Chalet gift certificates. The sight of LCol Garbutt and the chicken exchanging salutes was quite unique.
The prayer I composed for the occasion appears in English and French, the fruits of my recent French course. If you spot any errors, I'd be grateful to know about them.
Let us pray.
Prions.
Seigneur, nous nous rassemblons aujourd’hui pour vous demander, par votre gentilesse, de bénir le quatorzième escadron de maintenance.
Nous vous remercions pour la direction et pour la sagesse de LCol Garbutt, et nous vous demandons de bénir lui pendant qu’il assume ses nouvelles responsabilités comme le commandant de la seizième escadre à Borden. Gardez sa famille, Corinne, Andrew, and Sarah, pendant qu’ils doivent vivre éloignèes de leurs père.
Gracious God, we ask your blessing on this unit gathered here, 14 Air Maintenance Squadron.
We thank you for the leadership and for the wisdom of L.Col. Garbutt, and we ask you to bless him as he assumes his new duties as the Commander of 16 Wing at Borden. Please guard and protect his family, Corinne, Andrew, and Sarah, while they must live apart from him in Ottawa.
Nous vous demandons aussi de bénir notre nouveau commandant de l`escadron, LCol Flynn, sa conjointe Carolyn, et leur famille. Permettez la direction de LCol Flynn de continuer cet escadron d`être le meilleur escadron dans la Force Aerienne.
We ask you also to bless our new squadron commander, LCol Flynn, his wife Carolyn, and their family. May his leadership guide this squadron and help it continue to be the best squadron in the Air Force.
Seigneur, parmi la famille qui est cet escadron, nous vous remercions pour la naissance du troisieme enfant de la famille MacSween, et nous prions pour tous parmi nous qui ont besoin de votre aide puissante
Loving God, among the family that is this squadron, we give you thanks for the birth of the third son of the MacSween family, and we pray that all among us who are in need may know the help of your mighty power in their lives.
Aidez nous, nous prions, à se rappeler toutefois que les vies des autres comptent sur notre bon travail. Aidez nous de faire notre devoir envers Canada et envers l`un l`autre.
Help us, we pray, to remember always the lives of those who depend upon our good work. Help us to do our duty to Canada, and to one another.
Amen.
4 comments:
"Gardez sa famille, Corinne, Andrew, and Sarah"
Is "and" a word in francais Canadien? I was thinking "et," but my former FRE101 prof was from Paris.
Good catch, Steve. That should be "et" and that's the French "et", not the English Canadian "eh", eh? :)
MP
tres intiresno, merci
I prefer to start the French payer with « prions ensemble » though « Prions » is not wrong by any means. When identifying a person by name preceded by the rank I would use « du » in lieu of « de » so in this instance you should be saying: « ...la sagesse du LCol Garbutt, » The structure of the remainder of sentence is what we would refer to as an Anglicisme, or, the rendering of a French sentence using English grammar. The Complément d’objet should precede in this case the verb « nous vous demandons de le bénir » and I would continue with « alors qu’il assume ses nouvelles.... » which would better reflect assuming new responsibilities instead of what sounds in French as « for the duration of his.new duties » unless of course that is the intent of the prayer.
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